Fletcher's Family Food Factory

Letter Received from Fletcher's Family Food Factory

WALT: Persuade people to build/ not build the factory on our courts. I know I have learnt this lesson when I have my structure such as Thesis, 3 Main reasons with examples to back my reasons up, and my conclusion to end my argument. Here is my persuasive text to Fletcher's Family Food Factory: 

I believe that we should not build a factory in this school. Would you want them to take half of your school? Building a factory is bad, building  factory is uncool, building a factory makes us sad.

There will be no courts for the big kids to have basketball training and also for the kids to have to fun. Would you want the big and little kids to be bored every single day? This is the worst thing that could happen to our school. The children will not be able to play their games on the court because its gone and if we don't get any fitness we are not treating the body that God gave, because God created us to be fit and healthy. We have to respect the body of God.

If we have a factory there will be a fire. There will be a horrible fire caused by the factory. If the workers leave something hot on the whole night long, there will be no school. It gets worse Rooms 5, 7 and 8's chrome books will be gone forever. Would you want that to happen? Fires are awful, fires are dangerous, fires are fearful.

The Bishop of our school will be furious because they are taking half of his land away. He will go to the council and argue with the council about them taking away his land away. Would you want the Bishop to complain? He will complain about his land being taken. He will be distracted by the noise when he is reading something so he could teach other people about it. The Bishop will be sad, the bishop will be fierce, the Bishop will be worries

I believe that this is why we should not build a factory. If they build the factory there will be no courts for people to have fun on them. There will also be a serious fire, would you want that to happen? There will also be an argument with the Bishop and the council.