I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Mrs Dines.
Monday, 31 August 2015
Antarctica Quiz
As part of the immersion stage of our inquiry, we are developing knowledge and understanding about Antarctica.
Friday, 28 August 2015
Daffodil Day!!!
Today is Daffodil Day. My partner Giselle came over with her class and teacher Miss Craig for buddy blogging. She wore yellow.
Friday, 7 August 2015
Lectio Divina!!!
Scripture Reference - Psalm 4:5 - A Prayer for Protection
Learning Intention: At the end of this lesson we will be able to use the steps of Lectio Divina to analyse the message in scripture .
From the scripture the words that stand out for me . . .
- Distress . . . “ You gave me room when I was in Distress”
- Gracious . . . “ Be Gracious to me, and hear my prayer”
- Honor, Shame . . . “ How long, you people shall my Honor suffer Shame”
- Seek . . . “ How long will you vain words, and Seek after lies”
- Faithful . . . “ But know that the LORD has set apart the Faithful for himself
- Ponder . . . “ When you are disturbed, do not sin; Ponder it on your beds.
- Trust . . . “ Offer right sacrifices, and put your Trust in the LORD
Thursday, 6 August 2015
Religious Education
Learning Intentions:
Identify the number of Petitions in the Our Father and what they are about.
Link to Actual Prayer . . . The Our Father
Prayer: The petition is . . .
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Interpretation: This petition means . . .
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“Give us this day our daily bread”
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that we are asking God to give us food and strength everyday.
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“Forgive us our tresspasses as we forgive those who trespass against us”
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that we are asking God to forgive us our sins and all our wrongdoings and we can forgive others for what they have done to hurt us.
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“Lead us not into temptation”
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that we cannot sin because it can lead us into a place where we can’t be in.
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“But deliver us from evil”
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that evil is always trying to drag us to them and we need God’s help to push all the evil that is trying to make us sin.
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Wednesday, 5 August 2015
Best Advertisement . . .
Reading analysis: Best Advertisement Ever
Persuasive strategy
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Yes / No
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How the author used it?
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Claim – States the main
point or stance
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Yes
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The producer intelligently obtained our attention by making us think about what we can do to help those who are in need. As the advertisement plays the subtitles are shown not only to make us read but to make us think about the actions that the main character is displaying and how we can act in the same way. The details that are shown in the video show the thoughtfulness and generosity that the main character improvises.
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Big Names – Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
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No
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Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility
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Yes
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The six characters, and the one dog are all people that the main character visits everyday. The witnesses in the advertisement doubt him and think to themselves ‘What is he doing’ and ‘What does he get in return’. Not only was this video made to entertain but it was made to show people that there are a lot of people suffering because they have no food to eat and shelter to keep themselves warm. These situations are very important, because not only children but adults can die from hypothermia by living outside in the cold especially when it’s raining.
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Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
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Yes
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Sadness was the main emotion that was shown in the clip. The video shows how sad and hard it must’ve been for the little girl and her mother suffering with no food and no home to sleep in and they're still alive. Not only does this video show sadness but it also shows how heartbreaking it would have been for all those suffering for poverty. The background music that was played was not only soothing but it was full of sadness.
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Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or facts to support the argument
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No
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Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency for the cause
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Yes
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There were a lot of causes in the video clip. It shows us that a lot of children have to live their lives with not only food, water and shelter but they have to suffer with no education. All children need an educational life. Without no education children won’t have a bright future.
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Research – Uses studies and
information to make the
argument seem more convincing; this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.
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No
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Advertising Critique
Cadbury Caramel Eggs:
LI: Write an advertising critique about an advertisement using ethos,pathos and logos.
The writer very cleverly gains the audience’s attention by using the phrase ‘Don’t get caught’ and repeats it throughout the whole ad. This phrase miraculously grabs our attention.
The advertisement had the big name Cadbury which is New Zealand's famous worlds renounced chocolate company.
The director also used the phrase ‘little angel’ to make the audience think that she is sweet and innocent.
When the writer says in the clip that it is ‘irresistibly tasty’ it persuades you to go out and buy it because once you go in it’s going to be too late.
The phrase ‘Can’t resist them’ was mentioned in written form. The smooth double coated chocolate with creamy caramel was said as irresistibly tasty and good.
The writer added that everybody should go and buy a caramel egg because once you go to get one it’s suddenly gone!
Writing Critique
Best Advertisement Ever:
Claim - States the main point or stance
The producer intelligently obtained our attention by making us think about what we can do to help those who are in need. As the advertisement plays the subtitles are shown not only to make us read but to make us think about the actions that the main character is displaying and how we can act in the same way. The details that are shown in the video show the thoughtfulness and generosity that the main character improvises.
Ethos - Tries to build trust and credibility
The six characters, and the one dog are the people that the main character visits everyday. The witnesses in the advertisement doubt him and think to themselves ‘What is he doing’ and ‘What does he get in return’. Not only was this video made to entertain but it was made to show people that there are a lot of people suffering because they have no food to eat and shelter to keep themselves warm. These situations are very important, because not only children but adults can die from hypothermia by living outside in the cold especially when it’s raining.
Pathos - Appeals to the audience's emotions
Sadness was the main emotion that was shown in the clip. The video shows how sad and hard it must’ve been for the little girl and her mother suffering with no food and no home to sleep in and they're still alive. Not only does this video show sadness but it also shows how heartbreaking it would have been for all those suffering for poverty. The background music that was played was not only soothing but it was full of sadness.
Kairos - Sense of Urgency
There were a lot of causes in the video clip. It shows us that a lot of children have to live their lives with not only food, water and shelter but they have to suffer with no education. All children need an educational life. Without no education children won’t have a bright future.
Tuesday, 4 August 2015
Reading Analysis
We are learning to Write an advertising critique about an advertisement using ethos,pathos and logos.
Persuasive strategy
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Yes / No
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How the author used it?
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Claim – States the main
point or stance
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Yes
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The writer very cleverly gains the audience’s attention by using the phrase ‘Don’t get caught’ and repeats it throughout the whole ad. It grabs the audience’s attention.
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Big Names – Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
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Yes
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Cadbury was said as one of the famous companies that sell chocolate in New Zealand.
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Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility
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Yes
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The director also used the phrase ‘little angel’ to make the audience think that she is sweet and innocent.
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Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
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Yes
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When the writer says in the clip that it is irresistibly tasty it persuades you to go out and buy it because once you go in it’s going to be too late.
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Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or facts to support the argument
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Yes
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The phrase ‘Can’t resist them’ was mentioned in written form. The smooth double coated chocolate with creamy caramel was said as irresistibly tasty and good.
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Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency for the cause
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Yes
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The writer said that if you don’t get one you’ll lose it forever.
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Research – Uses studies and
information to make the
argument seem more convincing; this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.
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No
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Monday, 3 August 2015
Ari and the Pizza
We are learning to develop the understanding of ethos, pathos and logos.Reading Analysis: Ari and the Pizza
Persuasive strategy
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Yes / No
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How the author used it?
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Claim – States the main
point or stance
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Yes
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The writer has used the phrase “mom I feel like pizza tonight” this has made Ari’s mom feel like she should or should not buy pizza. The writer has set the scene for the audience to know that they are going to attempt to show how the tools ethos, pathos and logos can be used to persuade people.
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Big Names – Mentions experts and important people to support the argument
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No
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Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or
facts to support the argument
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Yes
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Ari has put a lot of thought to it and looked at the different types of toppings that different pizzas have. e.g “Mum pizzas has a lot of different kind of vegetables on it”
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Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
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Yes
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Ari knows that pizza makes him happy and he also knows that when his mom eats pizza it makes her happy as well.He also tells his mother that she looks exhausted and uses this to support his argument to get mum to order the pizza.
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Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
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Yes
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Ari used the food groups and mentions the Food pyramid, which add credibility to his understanding and impresses his mum that he is familiar with the food groups.
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Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency for the cause
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Research – Uses studies and
information to make the
argument seem more convincing;
this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations
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Yes
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Ari has researched everything he needs to know about pizza and has shown where pizzas stand in the food pyramid.
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Prayer
During this term Room 8 will be looking at the different types of Traditional Prayers that we can use in the morning. We have listed the different traditional prayers that we can pray in the morning.
Types of Traditional Prayers:
Types of Traditional Prayers:
- Our Father
- The Creed
- Hail Mary
- Glory Be
- I Confess
- The Confider
- The Adsumus
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